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FIC: Invasion of Privacy

Title: Invasion of Privacy
Author:  [info]dysonrules 
Gift Fic For: [info]kelahnus_24
Prompt: #58
Rating: PG13
Words: 11,280
Time-period / theme: Post Hogwarts, creature fic
Place: Malfoy Manor
Object / word prompts: elder wand, The Quibbler, broom
Action:Harry flying over Malfoy Manor
Preferences / Other notes: Harry in Auror program, no character bashing
Summary: I had fun with this prompt. I hope you enjoy it, even though it's slighly cracky.

Invasion of Privacy - hosted offsite (at dysonrules googlepages)



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[info]insaneformality

May 23 2009, 15:30:38 UTC 3 years ago

What a nice story. When I now, after reading the fic, look prompt I can see that author had fun with it. I want to know what boys do with collar before curse starts and I really, really want to see pictures in The Quibbler. Ending was sweet.

Narcissa and Lucius were brilliant. I can believe that Draco doesn't want to know what they do behind closed doors. "YES! Finally! I will RULE THE WORLD!" I couldn't stop laughing. Whole story left me feeling relaxed and happy. This is what one needs after a bad day to feel better.

[info]dragoncindre

May 23 2009, 19:48:05 UTC 3 years ago

*drool* i wish i could be the randy free elf to take pics of those two!!!!!
whoever the authr is you have my FULL ADORATION!!!!!!!
IS THERE A CHANCE FOR A SICUEL???*PUPPY-DOG EYES*

[info]delorispea

May 23 2009, 19:51:33 UTC 3 years ago

BAHA. Omg I cringed so bad along with Draco when his parents where like that. I had a friend who's parents where just as bad.


On the right side of awesome. You could tell you had fun! Was kinda gutted about Lucius still being a twat and trying to Imperio Harry but heh - can't change everyone :P

Loved it!

[info]anexiana

May 23 2009, 21:20:53 UTC 3 years ago

Omg, Lucius and Narcissa! Even though I cringed with Draco, they were ridiculously funny, especially Lucius. I loved Harry's entry into Malfoy Manor and the rest of it was just as fun. Oh and the the house-elf taking pictures in rebellion? Lol!

[info]alisanne

May 23 2009, 21:22:25 UTC 3 years ago

Bwahahahahaah! Oh that was delightfully cracky and hilarious. I really enjoyed it.
Lucius was a hoot and poor Draco having to put up with his overly-demonstrative parents was so cute. *giggles*
That was clearly a lot of fun for you to write and for me to read. *g*

[info]kelahnus_24

May 23 2009, 22:01:54 UTC 3 years ago

This was lovely! I loved the story and it came together better than I expected ^__^. Loved the fact that the Malfoy's were a bit crazy but hey that was part of the fun. It was awesome, great job!

[info]robyn_michaels

May 24 2009, 01:22:09 UTC 3 years ago

This was so much fun! I love the insanity of Lucius and Narcissa and all the things that made Draco queasy! LOL And the camera-weilding elf was a riot! I'd sure love to get my hands on those pictures though! Whew!

[info]serendipity_008

May 24 2009, 01:23:30 UTC 3 years ago

LoL That was brilliant! I really loved that. I like the idea of Harry stalking the Malfoys. Lucius and Narcissa were really funny. Poor Draco having to put up with their antics. At least he will now be too busy with Harry and the collar to actually worry much about his parents. I like how you incorporated the creature prompt. It was different. I loved the crazy Malfoys and their crazy hosue elves.
I wish there was more. I didn't want it to end :D

[info]beatnikspinster

May 24 2009, 02:37:53 UTC 3 years ago

That was adorable. I love Harry as a bear-dog!

[info]oldenuf2nb

May 24 2009, 04:03:33 UTC 3 years ago

This is very, very cute. I enjoyed it tremendously.

[info]tucker620

May 24 2009, 05:40:13 UTC 3 years ago

Good story!^^

[info]leela_cat

May 24 2009, 06:15:27 UTC 3 years ago

This was a lot of fun. Lucius and Narcissa were brilliant, as was the freed house elf who just wouldn't leave.

Draco and Harry were wonderful, and the end just made me smile.

[info]autumn_veela

May 24 2009, 08:23:46 UTC 3 years ago

Fantastic! Absolutely loved it. The plot was original, the characters were great (house elf paparazzi!) and the ending was perfect.

♥

[info]nursedarry

May 24 2009, 13:55:03 UTC 3 years ago

How wonderful and sweet! I loved the nutty Malfoys and bewildered!Harry. And yes, the water in Wiltshire does make everyone crazy if the meetings I have to sit through at the Great Western Hospital are anything to go by... Brava!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:13:36 UTC 2 years ago

HAHAHA! I'll have to ask you more about specifics next time I write about the Manor... Which is a lot.

[info]cassie_black12

May 24 2009, 22:55:01 UTC 3 years ago

That was a wonderful story. Harry made such a cute beast. Draco was adorable, getting all embarrassed by his parents'...activities, and I loved Lucius' 'RULE THE WORLD' speech.

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:11:56 UTC 2 years ago

I really wanted to do a parody of Beauty and the Beast, but it didn't quite turn out that way. LOL!

[info]tomatoe18

May 25 2009, 14:03:39 UTC 3 years ago

Insanely hilarious. :D Harry and Draco are fantastic. Harry, especially, when he got jealous over Blaise. But Lucius stole the show for me. I feel for Draco - life can't be too good if you're always risking walking in on your parents. *giggles* This was so much fun!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:06:05 UTC 2 years ago

*giggles* I could write about Lucius and Narcissa a LOT. They are definitely my fav canon het pair...

[info]cleo_jay

May 25 2009, 14:27:41 UTC 3 years ago

Oh this was loopily brilliant! Oversexed Lucius & Narcissa were hilarious & the paparazzi elf was great...I loved how Draco was so used to the insanity, he just rolled his eyes & carried on with what he was doing! Great fun to read! :D

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:05:02 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you my precious beloved wonderful beautiful gorgeous DARLING!!!!!!!

*kisses and kisses and kisses*

[info]verowyn

May 25 2009, 23:31:58 UTC 3 years ago

That was absolutely hilarious!
Lusting!Malfoys are just so funny!
Voldy couldn't seriously expect to won a war with Lucius! The Elder Wand thing made me laugh out loud. Well, the whole fic made me LOL.

Poor Draco, it's really not that easy to grow up in such a place!
The progress of his relationship with Harry was very sweet and Beast!Harry was really-really cute!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:02:46 UTC 2 years ago

*giggles* I love tormenting poor Lucius. Well, and having his parents torment Draco.

"We're BUSY!"
*facepalm Draco* "Not again."

[info]smirking_muse

May 26 2009, 16:18:38 UTC 3 years ago

Haha, this was great. It was very clever and kept me guessing (one surprise after another). I love how Lucius was still a bit power-hungry and crazy, but it seemed much more harmless. My only wish would be to get my hands on those pictures!! Hehe.

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:01:34 UTC 2 years ago

I secretly think Draco was paying the house elf to take photos...

[info]fireflavored

May 29 2009, 08:00:45 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, poor dog!Harry all lonely and howling down in the dungeon. I'm so glad Draco brought him up to his room where he belonged :)

I really liked the tone of this story. It just hinted at silliness enough to keep a smile on my face without ever distracting from the story developing between Draco and Harry. Loved it!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 02:59:31 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you, sweetie! I think Draco was starting to like puppy!Harry. *giggles*

[info]tari_sue

June 1 2009, 23:07:00 UTC 3 years ago

This fic is so much fun :)

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:00:50 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you! *snuggles*

[info]giddymorose

June 6 2009, 10:46:23 UTC 2 years ago

I loved the sneaky house elf taking photos of the boys. Lucius and Narcissa were hilarious :)

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 03:00:26 UTC 2 years ago

*grin* I do love me some Malfoys. I haven't been able to play with those two since Ransoms...

[info]b00kaddict

June 7 2009, 02:49:47 UTC 2 years ago

Just had to go back and re-read this. I still love it! Harry's puppy mentality, the Malfoys... the picture-taking House Elf. It's hilarious, but the story never gets lost. Brilliant!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 02:58:44 UTC 2 years ago

Awww, thank you so much! This one felt rushed to me because I got 8k into the original and scrapped it. This one is only loosely based on the first one... and lots more cracky. *grin*

[info]faithwood

June 7 2009, 16:03:43 UTC 2 years ago

I knew you are a big liar! Boring!!!!!?????

This was FANTASTIC. I loved every single person in this fic. Even Lucius. And CHAD! LOLOLOL!

There are so many great lines here, but this was definitely my favorite bit:

Lucius bellowed a huge, demented laugh and held the wand high. "YES! Finally! I will RULE THE WORLD!" He laughed again and clutched the fake wand to his chest, fondling it like a prized pet.

I died laughing! :D

I LOVE YOU!
I LOVE YOU!
I LOVE YOU!

[info]dysonrules

June 7 2009, 16:08:14 UTC 2 years ago

*giggles* I sort of stole Makani's Lucius and Narcissa for this fic. I adore slightly demented and completely obsessed with his wife Lucius. Long suffering Draco was too cute. Chad. *snickers* I couldn't resist.

*squishes you*

[info]lttlelola

June 7 2009, 19:47:56 UTC 2 years ago

you know i love your stuff, but that was AMAZING
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